[Report This]Date: November 29 2014 11:10 AM Title: Inside Stacy's stomach
Pity that you seem to have stalled out with this one. I was hoping to find out what happened to Ear Guy someday. . . .
Author's Response: He met a scary ending. Or should I say ... Ear-y ending? 'Tis a pun.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2013 1:59 PM Title: Inside Stacy's stomach
Im loving these chapters. Great work
[Report This]Date: October 18 2013 8:01 PM Title: Inside Stacy's stomach
I never would like one of them "go out the natural way" and survive, because that would be totally illogical and unrealistic, I am no fan of unrealistic scenarios (= Short passage into the small intestine is just a matter of minutes until they would dissolve, simple as that. They wouldnt make it longer than a few minutes at their size until getting turned into a lump of bones. I would like seeing more ironic twists too, some sarcastic writing style, adding lots of more humiliation. For example just after being pumped into the small intestine, it would "welcome" the two with its foulest presence, and John would be like "may... maybe I was wro...", and at that moment he would gag and vomit his own stomach content onto the small intestines "floor". Also it wouldnt be a passage at all, it would be a hell short trip :3
[Report This]Date: October 18 2013 5:39 PM Title: Inside Stacy's stomach
Hey :) Actually I didnt notice this story before, because the two first chapters were a little bit, well, hectic written for my part, lots of mistakes and yeah. But I thought giving it a 2nd try and this chapter went out really well, much better than I had expected. I am mostly into unaware shrinking and oral and anal vore, insertion, digestion, humiliation, irony and sarcastic writing style, "bad luck" evetns and charater death. I reall enjoyed the whole idea of them being swallowd and arrive in an emtpy stomach, just having some luquids left in it from earlier digestion. I always liked the idea of a plot where a swallowed characters wouldnt be digested by the stomach, but by the small intestine. So if I could wish for something to happen for the next part, this would be it. Most people dont know the small intestine actually is a much more digestive powerhouse than the stomach, because it doesnt digest by acid, but by enzymes and alkaline liquids. And it mist be a much more hellish experience than being "just" in a stomach. Maybe you could write it out that John somehow, because he doesnt know how digestion works, trys to give hope by telling they could have chances to go out the "natural" way and it would be some luck they weren digested by the stomach and now have chances of joining the small intestine, and the moment they would be pumped through the stomach exit, they would realize how wrong he is, because the moment they are on the other side, the stomach shuts tight again, the air would be thousand times worse than in the stomach, much more humid, maybe they would fell face down into the small intestine and would be like "maybe it wasnt such a good idea to go this wa..." and suddenly a wave of rush would send them much more way down the small intestine, no way of returning going back to the stomach exit. And small intestine digestion would kick in a few moments later, giving them the hellish experience of getting liqified while they are still fully conscious. A tip, you should never write a chapter in a browser window. Always write it in Word, Wordpad, or use Google Drive writing tool, where it would be always synced and saved. Then copy it over here.
Author's Response:
thanks for giving me another shot, i'm trying a new writing method. Your suggesstion is funny because that's kind of exactly what the next chapter is going to be. Although i am still trying to consider whether i should let one of them live to "go out the natural way" but writing that would be a little difficult. i actually knew the functions of the intestines when writing this and don't worry it won't be a pleasant passage. anyway, thankyou again for your feedback and suggestion it is much appreciated.