Date: October 04 2016 10:50 PM Title: Ch. 2 Mike's Final Moment
What a thrilling scenario. Will this story be continuing at all. Can't wait to see what Taylor does to Violet's victims...
[Report This]Date: June 13 2014 7:19 PM Title: Ch. 2 Mike's Final Moment
Awesome... Any further chapters.?..would be great to see more of Taylor
Date: December 08 2013 6:28 PM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
very good
[Report This]Date: September 09 2013 11:26 AM Title: Ch. 2 Mike's Final Moment
Rounds 1 and 2 to Via.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2013 11:15 AM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
OK! I'm officially jealous. This whole brilliant opener was longer than my entire prequel to IOTBTFOS!
[Report This]Date: September 07 2013 7:19 PM Title: Ch. 2 Mike's Final Moment
This is a great story - so realistic sounding.
The only detractions are minor spelling errors and some poor grammar.
Note: no need to include an apostrophe in plural words.
Please continue...
[Report This]Date: September 07 2013 5:40 PM Title: Ch. 2 Mike's Final Moment
Just read this. An I love these two chapters. I hope she decides to keep him as a pet an not kill him though. I love his teeny size as well as the details in this tale and I can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
[Report This]Date: September 07 2013 1:01 PM Title: Ch. 2 Mike's Final Moment
great story so far
Date: September 01 2013 5:16 PM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
Nope, this was my 'Actual' First-Story, Really! The Shack ' was second, I deleted my first attempt at this one after the first reveiw, only had it up for about 2 hours. I had large blocks of text that weren't spaced out enough..... THAT was my first, major change that I had to make...Ha, oh- well, I can see why you liked 'The Shack' so much, but, I would have guessed that you'd have liked 'Wombat Island' even more? ;`)
[Report This]Date: September 01 2013 3:36 PM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
Oh wait, I forgot about this one. Got it confused with your 'actual' first story.
Still like it though!