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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

I have an idea. He's going to slow-shrink. Let's see if chapter 3 proves me right.

Reviewer: DuffyBear Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow really excellent writing. I'm so glad I've caught this just before it goes off. Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks DuffyBear!! I really appreciate hearing that! hopefully I don't dissapoint! 

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