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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Some spelling mistakes here and there, but your formatting is solid. Kinda left off with a cliffhanger so I wouldn't call this finished, but you could always do more with a sequel or something.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I know theres still alot of spelling mistakes even after several readthroughs. Glad you got through it though, then it's not totally unreadable. 

Yea it is sort of a cliffhanger, but i think of it as complete. if i continue this, it will mostly be the two experimenting without too much storyline. 

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