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Reviewer: zupermanso Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath and Breakfast

Please
Continue the story
with insertion
Is fabulous

Reviewer: Smushed Boy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath and Breakfast

Lovely! The relationship between them are lovely! I can`t wait to see more ^^



Author's Response:

Thanks man, They have a strong bond

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath and Breakfast

I just read all four chapters in one sitting. And, I have to admit: it's not bad! A little over-reliant on the F-word, maybe. But, definitely and delightfully fast-paced! So, you can count on me to be here for chapter 5. If only to see whether or not the much-dreaded Krystal really does stumble across Our Hapless Little Hero.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Now that you mention it, I never even thought of putting Krystal into the story, but now I'll consider the option....

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath and Breakfast

Great chapter, but will she stay his friend or will she make him hoe farther than he is comfortable with. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

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