Date: October 18 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
Probably one of the best stories I have read in a long time happy to see it back
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
This is a great story! You should write a continuation of this
Date: October 12 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
Glad to see you back, your story was so well written, I sure did miss it.
Can't wait to see what will happen now that he's normal again. I'm pretty sure she's the one who controls his height, and she doesn't want him to go, so she'll shrink him again, against his will, this time. Then things will get interesting :D
Or maybe I'm wrong. But hey, time will tell !
[Report This]Date: October 22 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
Carol's shaping up to be a fine example of "You're my friend, but now you're tiny and I'm in charge. So you better fucking listen to me or else."
Keep going!
Author's Response:
That is a better example than I could have ever came up with...
[Report This]Date: August 13 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
I literally made an account JUST to throw in my two cents.
I absolutely LOVE this story and I really hope you continue the story with the two characters as is. Of course, that's my personal preference. I really enjoy the emphasis on feet in this story and I haven't read one that's in this sort of scenario and I love it.
11/10 :)
Author's Response:
Woah, thanks man, means a lot, I'm on vacaction so I won't start writing til I come back.
Date: August 03 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
I quite like this story so far. It is fast paced so that makes it easy to read. Although that might be a bit to be critiqued. It wouldn't hurt to drag out the dialogue and actions a bit. Let us know the characters a bit better.
And for example, a key scene so far, the "humping of the feet". I really like that scene (and this is coming from a non-foot-fetisch guy), but I feel it would have deserved more attention. That is was longer, more descriptive, more arousing to the reader.
I always try to be honest. But I would not dare to tread on your freedom as an author.
The writing is quite good, I hope to see you make more progress the more you bite your teeth into this story.
A pleasant writing style. I appreciate the funny lines of dialogue, how the characters jest with each other. Very creative.
Keep going with this, get your creativity out.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I loved your review! And yes, I try and make it a point to write longer scenes like that one, but I find myself unable to come up with words to keep things going, but I will definitely try.
The dialogue is a little unique isn't it? haha
Date: July 24 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
UH OH! Carol is starting to notice her power over him...
Date: July 19 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
interesting. the male character seems much more mature than carol. which is odd if they are the same age. i liked the moral dilemma you put micro into and the way you played it out. it was the best written part so far. i hope you can continue in the same vein. i like carols playfulness, but micro seems like hes five years older than her, if not more.
Author's Response:
Ironically Carol is the elder of the two, being atleast 3 months older than Micro
[Report This]Date: July 19 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
Btw I love how the story is progressing and I can't wait to see her turning him into a toy. I don't mind it playing out, I love suspence. To me thats what makes a story worth reading.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
If there's anything I love, it's a cliffhanger :P. I like how your spelling, grammar, and formatting are very good. It makes the story MUCH easier to read. I hope you decide to keep this going! I would love for him to take a longer ride on her foot... Maybe some scotch tape could help ;D
Author's Response:
Trust me, Micro is going to have a lot of foot fun with Carol soon
[Report This]Date: July 17 2013 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
What a teaser! He's starting to 'Really' shrink, and you make us wait? Oh, I can see that this is going to be a good one...
Carol is gunna have a new 'toy' to play with, I hope she doesn't play too roughly,..NOT! ;`)
Quick! Time to hide him somewhere, before someone sees him!
Date: July 17 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
good so far! :D
[Report This]Date: July 17 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
It was ok. I would like to see how she treats him if he stayed tiny, I also would like to see a longer story.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
This is a really good story, I hope you continue it!