Date: November 28 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 6: Finally
This ending SCREAMS for a second episode, I hope you know that :D
PS: am I the only one who reads: "
Kapitel Abschlussbemerkung:hope you like the surprise, please review.
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Date: October 18 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
Probably one of the best stories I have read in a long time happy to see it back
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
This is a great story! You should write a continuation of this
Date: October 12 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
Glad to see you back, your story was so well written, I sure did miss it.
Can't wait to see what will happen now that he's normal again. I'm pretty sure she's the one who controls his height, and she doesn't want him to go, so she'll shrink him again, against his will, this time. Then things will get interesting :D
Or maybe I'm wrong. But hey, time will tell !
Date: November 23 2013 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 5: Family and ex friends
Since English is a second language for me, while reading the story I couldn't get out of my head the idea that she spoke like a boy... but I'll trust gadgetmawombo on that ;p
Seriously, great story, and it looks like it still has a lot to give.. so please KEEP. WRITING!
Author's Response:
Carol is a major tomboy and cuses like a sailor, so I see how she would sound like a boy
Date: October 28 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Family and ex friends
I really love this story.
Date: October 23 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 5: Family and ex friends
The only problem I have is that you do not write often enough. Hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
I WILL!
[Report This]Date: October 22 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
Carol's shaping up to be a fine example of "You're my friend, but now you're tiny and I'm in charge. So you better fucking listen to me or else."
Keep going!
Author's Response:
That is a better example than I could have ever came up with...
[Report This]Date: August 13 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
I literally made an account JUST to throw in my two cents.
I absolutely LOVE this story and I really hope you continue the story with the two characters as is. Of course, that's my personal preference. I really enjoy the emphasis on feet in this story and I haven't read one that's in this sort of scenario and I love it.
11/10 :)
Author's Response:
Woah, thanks man, means a lot, I'm on vacaction so I won't start writing til I come back.
Date: August 11 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath and Breakfast
Please
Continue the story
with insertion
Is fabulous
Date: August 03 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
I quite like this story so far. It is fast paced so that makes it easy to read. Although that might be a bit to be critiqued. It wouldn't hurt to drag out the dialogue and actions a bit. Let us know the characters a bit better.
And for example, a key scene so far, the "humping of the feet". I really like that scene (and this is coming from a non-foot-fetisch guy), but I feel it would have deserved more attention. That is was longer, more descriptive, more arousing to the reader.
I always try to be honest. But I would not dare to tread on your freedom as an author.
The writing is quite good, I hope to see you make more progress the more you bite your teeth into this story.
A pleasant writing style. I appreciate the funny lines of dialogue, how the characters jest with each other. Very creative.
Keep going with this, get your creativity out.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I loved your review! And yes, I try and make it a point to write longer scenes like that one, but I find myself unable to come up with words to keep things going, but I will definitely try.
The dialogue is a little unique isn't it? haha
Date: July 24 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
UH OH! Carol is starting to notice her power over him...
Date: July 23 2013 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath and Breakfast
Lovely! The relationship between them are lovely! I can`t wait to see more ^^
Author's Response:
Thanks man, They have a strong bond
[Report This]Date: July 23 2013 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath and Breakfast
I just read all four chapters in one sitting. And, I have to admit: it's not bad! A little over-reliant on the F-word, maybe. But, definitely and delightfully fast-paced! So, you can count on me to be here for chapter 5. If only to see whether or not the much-dreaded Krystal really does stumble across Our Hapless Little Hero.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Now that you mention it, I never even thought of putting Krystal into the story, but now I'll consider the option....
[Report This]Date: July 23 2013 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath and Breakfast
Great chapter, but will she stay his friend or will she make him hoe farther than he is comfortable with. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Date: July 19 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
interesting. the male character seems much more mature than carol. which is odd if they are the same age. i liked the moral dilemma you put micro into and the way you played it out. it was the best written part so far. i hope you can continue in the same vein. i like carols playfulness, but micro seems like hes five years older than her, if not more.
Author's Response:
Ironically Carol is the elder of the two, being atleast 3 months older than Micro
Date: July 19 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 3: Just a fetish
Liking it so far, looking forward to things picking up but I hope not too much, I'd like for Carol to take control but still be nice at times cause she doesn't strike me as being all mean.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: Just a fetish
Carol is quite possibly the coolest girl in the world. Great chapter
aaron
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks Aaron, she is really cool
[Report This]Date: July 19 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: Just a fetish
His parents are fucking assholes. I love Carol and the voice she speaks in, she sounds kind of like one of the bro's but still sexy and feminine. And the way she conforted him after what he did was awesome, she's a really likable character. PROPS.
Author's Response:
Dude thank you, I was hoping someone would notice how chill Carol was when Micro lashed out his fetish upon her feet. For once I wanted to write about a down to earth girl who didn't want to kill or use him for sex
[Report This]Date: July 19 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: From person to doll
Btw I love how the story is progressing and I can't wait to see her turning him into a toy. I don't mind it playing out, I love suspence. To me thats what makes a story worth reading.