Date: July 18 2013 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great so far. Keep going ! move up to X rated between Jessica and Tobias.Let's find out Jessica Bi.Have Jessica and Tobias bring in many trust worth female and male tiny vampires.give the small amount each needs.Jessica could safely lead a support a fair size group by herself.
A good follow on story would be after Jessica got her own place.It could be safe house for a ever larger group of trust worthy vampires male and female working for her and tobias to get the income to support the safehouse and more