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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 1:00 PM Title: Day to day

Not bad! But, you'll have to do a LOT of re-editing to correct for misspellings. Not to mention that the character dialogue should at least be double-spaced apart from narrative text.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 5:06 AM Title: Day to day

Great story, love the cruelty. I hope you take it farther. I can't wait to see how this goes.

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