Date: September 24 2015 10:55 PM Title: Epilogue
Love Jessica becoming more and more independent, and leaving Drew in the dust :)
[Report This]Date: July 30 2013 8:57 PM Title: Epilogue
Bravo good sir, bravo.
[Report This]Date: July 30 2013 5:58 PM Title: Epilogue
Heartless and self-centered, Ms. Bloom.....
I was kinda expecting her to do it,...but I was hoping that he would be casually passed off to a brand new 'Freshman' girl, and his slavery would begin all over again with a younger prettier giantess....
At least she did make it quick though ;(...
[Report This]Date: July 30 2013 5:50 PM Title: Epilogue
Even more anti-climactic than the previous chapter. :-(
[Report This]Date: July 30 2013 5:16 PM Title: Epilogue
That was harsh but honestly I wasn't too shocked that she did away with him. I was just hoping she'd have a change of heart or something. This story was a very good read. Glad the poor guys suffering was ended quickly at least.
aaron
[Report This]Date: July 30 2013 4:26 PM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this story overall. The characters were good, the writing was well above average and in no way distracting. There aren't many negatives as this was a really enjoyable story.
However, i have to say the ending was slightly anti-climatic. I don't mind crush, however most of the other things in the story you kind of built towards. This just seemed kind of tacked on.
A more ambigious ending may have been better served. Maybe as she packs up all her stuff she just leaves the shoe box sitting in the room and leaves without the reader ever knowing if she took him, left him in the shoe box, or killed him.
However, with that said, fun read from start to finish. good job!
[Report This]Date: July 30 2013 3:17 PM Title: Epilogue
I have never read a story I enjoyed more. Perfect, perfect, perfect. I'm going to read it again!