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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

If I were Drew, I'd take advantage of the situation by remembering that old anime lyric:

"Go-go-go, ASTRO BOOOOOOOOOOOY!"

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2013 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

Drew has got to be the un-luckiest dude in the world,...or maybe the Luckiest!  I loved the ride inside of her tight shorts pocket, and the casual way that Jess 'washed' him at the sink.  Watching Ms Bloom eating was so wonderfully described that I felt like I was sitting on her food tray!  ( I could almost smell the crispy bacon ) 

This is a fantastic work of novelist quality.  Your way of writing is quite dramatical, and very detailed and well developed in process.  I look forward to watching this play out...

P.S. Even the 'giant-men', in chapter 2 was tastefully done, and did make this seem alot more realistic....

Great Stuff Dude,  I'm Hooked on it!

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

This story is awesome but she's such a big bully. At least she hasn't killed him yet.

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