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Reviewer: probablynotgood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

you an asshole dude a mother fucking asshole the youngest the mother doesnt want to protect you are such a mother fucking asshole

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

I am cool with folks that don't like cruel stuff like this between family members. However, this is the perfect kind of story for me. The absolute cruely without hope for reprieve for this son, coupled with the poweful feet of his siblings and mom, makes me super excited to see more meanness taken to a pungent and fatal end! I do have to say, while this is just my own opinion, I hope the brother steers clear fo anything interaction with his young, smaller brother.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

For some reason the way his family is treating him depressed me when I read this, it it were some random strangers or a girlfriend but his own mother...This story kinda reminds me of "A child named it" in the sense that his mother torments him and only him as the youngest and the siblings are join in on it.

Im sure that it wasn't your intention for people to feel that way about this story, at least I think so with the semi-lighthearted tone you have. But some of the tidbits you've given such as how his mother said they were just gonna leave him in the beginning or how she said that she'd shrink and torment do her children and doesn't include Jake just got to me for some reason.

I cant help but feel bad for him, his own family doing this to him and from what you've described it isn't because he was a douchebag or asshole, it was because he was simply a loser...I put myself in his position as I read this and I felt like killing myself.

Anyway, Im sure that this isn't what youd intended from this story and I HAVE read MUCH MORE violent stories on this site...But this one got me a little emotional, I dont know why. But hey, I got a different sort of "enjoyment" out of this than most people so I really like this story!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

Chapter 5 and 6 were really, really great, especially chapter 5. My penny for another chapter would be, of course I would love to see a vore and digestion ending somewhere, or a fatal anal vore one, combined with unaware. But I also would love to see a chapter with his brother, Hal. Maybe the girls leave him the size of a dust mite, and his brother accidentally interacts with him, and because he doesn't know he's that tiny now, he wouldn't know that he causes some unfortunate events for his dust mite brother, also because he doesn't know, there would be no chance for him making him bigger again. An accidental/unaware anal or oral vore including a fatal ending with his brother would be great. Or maybe the girls put him even in the situation, and play with Jake and Hal in that way, putting Jake maybe in his brothers unwerwear, using a glob of glue on the backsides inner middle part and glueing Jake there, so he would take some deep diving later, which could go out of controle for the girls, not knowing anymore where Jake is, or Hal leaving the house unplaned, so the grils wouldn't have a chance anymore to make Jake bigger. Or putting Jake in cereals for Hal, mostly some unfortunate events would take place, at first they wanted to just play with Jake, but then comes a phone call or theres someone on the door, and Hal fastly eats his cereals and leaves for school. Anyway, an interaction with Hal and Jake would be nice to see, especially when Hal would be unaware about giving his younger brother some hell ride.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter, love how there Ideas were basically chemical warfare to get their "brother/son" out. I still think they should have a limited size change and that he is very durable which opens a whole world of unbearable torture.

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