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Reviewer: probablynotgood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

NOT COOL!

Reviewer: Mr E Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

"a house that he desperately wanted to live in." great line

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story... I love this story... I love this story...

I love this story. Please tell me there is more to come?

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2013 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

 I just spotted a few spelling/typing errors. Other than that great chapter, I think it would be great if she started to have gas or sonething along those lines. I can she jake struggling eit the putrid fumes and Sky loving the feeling in her ass.

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2013 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 4

As far as I enjoyed this story, I have to admit my frustration and disappointment towards you as an author. Don't get me wrong, this story seems to be great, and I will rate it 10 points, but it mostly ever will finished, like all your other great stories. You seem to write just to the best parts of a story, include really great cliffhangers, and than abandon the story, and begin a new one. So I hope I am just wrong on this, and of course I so damn would love to see this continue. There are older stories of you where I would say the same, but I dont want to begin a talk of ping pong. You should focus on one story, and finish it, then go to another. Im sure Im not alone on this who things that way. Anyway, about this story, and what I would like to see how it goes:

- Im a hugh fan of anal insertion, so the next coming chapters seem to be awesome already

- an idea I got was, maybe he suddenly shrinks the moment he comes into contact with his sisters anus. She wouldnt be unaware about this though. Maybe farts of her causes the guy to shrink every time. 

- so he would get shrink to the size of a rice corn or lint and gets lost deep inside his sisters rectum. She would think of you jumped out just before you got inserted and would be unaware about what happened to you.

- at some point his sister would need to use the bathroom, which end in fatality

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