I HAVE SEEN ENOUGH I AM NOT READING ANYMORE OF THIS THIS STORY IS MOTHER FUCKING CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was great! How about Brooke still decides to keep him, maybe plays some games with him to have fun, like being chased or hide and seek? Otherwise, you could have Jake actually try to escape his prison somehow and try to make his way across the room -- or out of it even -- in the middle of the night, whene everyon'e sleeping, only to find out that Brooke noticed his escape and is hunting him down at night, not wanting to get caught by the family for almost letting him escape? Otherwise still you could keep up the footplay, with more insulting talks down to him, as she gets more power hungry that even she thought. Some of the suggestions form others last time about Brooke were good too, for example, and you could try those!