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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think they should say who will watch him at night and who gets him what days. I think these should be different since he should have a prenament "home" and I think that it should be Brooke. I would like her to be more evil and kepp him in her underware drawer of make him sleep in her shoes/socks/stockings. I hope you take these ideas under consideration.

Reviewer: Chaos Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think this is a great concept for a story. Take the ideas of the fans of your writing and GTS incest and write a fantastic story that everyone can enjoy. I got more ideas then I can count. I'd love to chat with you through SMS on AIM or Skype about them. My email adress is mego@shaw.ca just tell me if you want to talk. 

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