Date: August 15 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Going great. Keep it up. I'd like to see this new girl take everyone out for a healthy dinner and it gives them all bad gas and they pass the bug boy around to see who smells worse. Not a big fan of male giant stuff though. And maybe throw some more butt action in there always good!!!
[Report This]Date: August 08 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the latest chapter. From the the tiny brother crawling on his brothers hand, to his experience as Hal masturbated, to where he put him when he was done. It was all great!
I hope Hal gets to enjoy his brother longer after he's seen the light. I'd still love to see some cock vore or maybe he let's his brother crawl around in the wrinkles of his sack or if you want to get really crazy he could shrink him down even smaller when he's swimming in his load so he's the size of sperm. Let him see what it's like to be really micro! Keep it as perverted as possible, maybe even write a few chapters with deaths and rewind before he died at the next chapter. I hope we see Jake suffer even worse at the hands of his oh so loving family.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
And it just gets better and better. I'm a great fan of micro stories, and wish there were more good ones around. I've enjoyed the aware parts of the story, and while I'm not into giant guys, I like that you've moved into unaware stuff too. It'd be great to see something like the brother realising where his tiny sibling is and getting revenge on his sisters with some more unawares stuff.
The proper-micro aspect is great too. I'd love to read about him getting trapped in the wrinkles of one of his sister's assholes, or glued with sweat to one of their underarms or in their groin (I'm not an armpit guy, but it's rarely done and it's kinda believable that he could end up there or be put there by his brother without the person knowning). It'd even be nice to see a return to the nasal stuff earlier, with the protagonist now at his even smaller size. It'd be amazing if because of his tiny size the girls would pick him up with a saliva-coated finger much as we do for tiny bits of plastic and food and such. I'd love if they forgot about him while he was trapped somewhere on their body too.
I wrote so much about what 'I'd love' that I feel bad. I really just want to say keep up the fine work. I still check back for this all the time. It makes me want to take up writing, too!
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: August 06 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I hope in the next chapter Hal finds out what happened with Jake and got mad at his family so then their mom and sisters shrinks Hal too and then Jake and Hal has to survive together with their giant family.
Date: August 05 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story bro.. I loved the booty stuff with Skylar and I love the vore aspect with Amy! I love the cruelty.. keep it up! I hope Amy eats him ! <3
Date: August 05 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
The mom and Skylar are so sexy. Love the ass material with the sister. I sure wish the mom fed his tiny speck form to her drooling pussy before maybe eating him out of it. Very nice and intense!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the past few chapters, despite being a forced-footsmelling fan. In fact, given how tiny he is now and the monstrous smell of his sister's and mother's feet, I am going to hope hard that this story ends in a fatality. And I know you enjoy the forced-foot stuff, too. So, I am voting for Amy to scrunch her super tiny son under her mammath toes and let the pungent smell destroy him. I think that would be an awesome ending and a way to finally introduce (one time only, of course) her much-lauded foot stink.
Date: August 03 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm just wondering when jake will be a toy for his older brother.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so much, and am really excited to keep reading. I'm checking twice a day... Please please keep it up!
[Report This]Date: July 09 2013 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have a suggestion that may give you an idea! After you go through the family, maybe he's given to a teenage girl (I'm a teen so i always look for teen stories) at school that he likes. My two favourites are feet and mouth play so I hope to see that stuff! Great job with the story, I really like it! Please don't belike the authors that write a good story and don't finish it :)
Date: July 03 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Skylar should make him worship her ass all day, licking her asshole till the night. She would occasionally fart on him and play with him under her.
Date: June 28 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
How about Jake wakes up the next morning and is grabbed by brooke and she heads to the bathroom. While in the bathroom she decides what to do next with him and decides to pleasure herself and masturbate using him as a dildo. He gets covered in his sisters juices and is left watching her shower. He is then brought to her mom for breakfast and she breastfeeds him. He then spends the entire day as her buttplug then returned back to brooke where he is kept in the front of her panties inside her pussy where he will spend the night inside of.
Date: June 27 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I see a lot of feet/stocking/socks suggestions and thats really fine and all, but there is a lot of feet storys out there, try to be creative!I would love to see some interaction with the mom, like if she keeps him in the back of her underwear and smush him in her ass, or sits on him, or makes him massages the inside of her ass too!There isnt a lot of butt related storys out there, specially with overweight girls. And there could be some interaction with the brother too, maybe him getting on his underwear or something?I see toilet tag on the story so, a little of that, maybe with the mom would be nice too. So far its getting really good, just try to make the descriptions of how he feels more elaborate since that is the part that allows the reader to imagine what it would be like to be on his place. Keep doing it this good, its a really goos sotry so far.
Date: June 27 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I also agree on brooke being his personal "home" but it could be up to you on how he stays with her. It could either be by insertion (trapped insider her), or inside her socks while she sleeps. I also like the idea of him being scotch taped so he could also be scotch taped to parts of her body while she is asleep like her boobs or her legs or her butt.
Date: June 26 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far, it's actually pretty good! Glad to see that he's at such a small size too, seems pretty appropriate. Although it would be interesting to see if one of them actually revealed to somehow have the power (or even be the cause of) to change his size, and could threaten to make him even smaller. That, or the virus kicks in and makes him unexpectantly smaller specifically on an occasion when he shouldn't have backtalked, tried to escape, or whatever, making things a whole lot worse for him upon discovery.
In all honesty, I'd very much like to see Brooke have him for the day, and enjoy teasing and playing with him underfoot, chasing him around on purpose, and bossing him around a lot. She seems to have the perfect attitude for a bitchy, bossy, power hungry and threatening personality, and all that while showing off how she can control him with her feet, and have him in actual danger -- on purpose or by accident -- would be great!
Otherwise, the same could go for his other sister, only she would be more chirpy, childish and playful, and she'd realize how much fun she could have with him only when she ltierally starts using him as a doll. Even with her I wouldn't mind seeing some foot interaction (I admit, footplay's easily my thing).
I also highly agree on many of the suggestions so far, like being used as jewelry, having turns each day and having Brooke as the definitive "home" (aka her underwear drawer), and stuff like that, so good job to everyone else too!
Otherwise, it's your call, but those are my two cents. Keep up the great work!
Date: June 26 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
A couple of suggestions: 1. At half an inch tall, handling Jake would be a problem, so his family should use scotch tape. It would act like fly paper and allow them to stick Jake anywhere (muscles, breasts, walls, furniture) without losing him. 2. Jake could be used as parts of jewelery (earrings, lockets, toe rings, etc) worn by his family.
Date: June 26 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hollow! I always look forward to your stories :)
Date: June 26 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would like to see him used as a "bath-toy', and forced to use a small-sized, brush to scrub his sisters feet, and then rub large amounts of lotion on his mothers feet, while she traps him under her toe's, and keeps him inside her nylon panty-hose, and makes him paint her toe-nail's and well you know....Fun Stuff! :0
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Date: June 26 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Have Jake worship his sisters nylon feet, then get put into the nylons with their feet afterwards. Just a suggestion of course
[Report This]Date: June 26 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far, i think that if Skylar would get him, she will forget about him because of her phone, in the evening she will want to pleasure herself and she will see him "Why not?" She thinks.