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Reviewer: SomeRRight Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just got around to reading your stuff. It doesn't have any of the tags I'm interested in, but I have to say that this is really fantastic, precise writing. I read the first three chapters of this one and it looks like it's going to be great. I'll give my thoughts when I'm on the other side in a couple days.

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

whoa! I must have missed this one last year because you posted all the chapters in one day. tip: try to space them out, leave som suspense.

The detail put into this story is incredible. It is it's own world and through your writng skills I have been immersed in it while reading. it's so descriptive that I feel it a sequal has been made and I have nere heard of it before. I could go on but I'll cut this review short and let you know that my favorte part was with Sophia and Kiki. it's too bad he didnt make it.

Reviewer: R1111 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing story with great characters. Looking forward to your next story 

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