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Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 7:12 PM Title: Ch. 12 Lunch Time

How did I see this coming? Just... How?

A Scientist's Theory- Either ze fog had shrunk ze men and ze island, or, ze island was always small and only shrunk ze men. Forever. Wherever zey would find themselves.



Author's Response:

Veddie inta-desting Dr. Dudeman, but zee ex-act theory is most divi-cult to dis-gribe U-seee,  aw most secre-tive plot is unraveling right before your veddie eye's! ;`)..........

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 6:17 PM Title: Ch. 12 Lunch Time

Now, THAT is what I call a plot twist!

:-D

Author's Response:

Suspect the unexpected, and expect the suspected,...  Only, when your really expecting it, - THAT's when to Not expect it...  :{]>   LOL !

Maybe that's the definition of a 'plot-twist' though, I don't know, I'm just fiddling around here with this keyboard  heh, heh, heh, ;`)

Reviewer: Crocodile Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2013 7:11 PM Title: Ch. 12 Lunch Time

Looks like it was the guys who got small after all and the Giantess is just a normal sized girl..  Hmm.. If I'm right then this is a pleasant surprise.  :)



Author's Response:

There will definitly be a surprize,  and maybe the best of both world's?  An inter-worldly, alternate dimentional tropical island, centered in the far corner of the bermuda tri-angle.....  Like Dorthy said, in the "Wizard of Oz", anything is possable if you just believe...

Thanks Crocodile, always look forward to an insightful response such as yours.  Keeps me interested in continuing this fan-tale!   ;`)

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