Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 8:05 PM Title: Ch. 3 Night Watch

Well, you misspelled: "enormous;" "arousal;" "intoxicating;" "odor;" and "perspiration." But, aside from all that?

It was an awesome new chapter. :-)

Author's Response:

Wow, thet ar a hole binch of 'E's, an 'I's in them are 'word's of thet kin of spillin err's Huh?  Damn, I need a 'spellcheck' or sumthun...