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Date: September 07 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 17

Dah Liah backwards is Hail Had. Good mentions of Avengers and Wonder Woman.



Author's Response: Actually, it's more of a veiled reference to Dahliah Lavi. The sultry European brunette actress who co-starred with Dean Martin in the very first "Matt HeLm" movie.

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Date: September 07 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

Ray Venn (Raven?)



Author's Response: Exactly. :-)

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Date: September 05 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad to see this story contiuned. He is lucky Dah is friendley. But the authories realize they are delaing with aliens. That could make things intresting.

 



Author's Response: Indeed, it will. ;-)

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Date: August 14 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 15

I've heard that song. 

I must say I was not expecting a flashback to a television special from the 26th century.

Wonder who has captured our hero?



Author's Response: That, too, shall soon become clear, young Skywalker.* *Insert "Imperial Death March," here.

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Date: July 29 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

Glad to see our hero win the fight. But I can't help but wonder, since when Bubla has been a kisser. Most of my GTS-Goddesses are not kissers.

Also one wonders when this story is taking place. i say that because Bubla won't become a GTS-Goddess until 2022. (see the GTS-Goddess guide)

That said, I still enjoying the story.



Author's Response: I thought your GTS-goddesses created their pets by kissing. Ah, well! All will become clear, eventually, young Skywalker. LOL!

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Date: July 28 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

He caught up with the sizevamp. Looks like a fight will start any second now. 



Author's Response: You must be psychic, too. ;-)

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Date: July 28 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

Not the sewers canal?



Author's Response: As they say in Italy: "Ats-ah no nice to Panama chapter, like-ah that."

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Date: July 27 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 12

I loved the Colossus of Rhodes story in the Young Samson 1967 cartoon.



Author's Response: Well, it sounds more dignified than "the Peter Pan Pose."

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Date: July 27 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

Woman of the hour,

Now she's in the shower....



Author's Response: A homage to the late, great Janet Leigh.

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Date: July 27 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 10

If Lamrev's an anagram of Marvel, what's Racym?



Author's Response: Racym Iocc: another variant of Carycomic* *Do I have to have a foot-noted explanation for _everything_, now? ;-)

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Date: July 27 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

Glad this chapter got off on one good FOOT



Author's Response: The PUN-isher strkes again.

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Date: July 26 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

The plot twists keep coming. Wonder who or what he run into next.



Author's Response: Just wait and see, dude! ;-)

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Date: July 26 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

What the? I did not expect a sizevamp to show up.



Author's Response: Wait till you see the (un-footnoted) explanation for his presence!

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Date: July 18 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh dear. Security is on the ball. Ray Venn job just got harder.



Author's Response: Well, I can't make his antagonists _too_ incompetent. That would be boring! ;-)

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Date: July 17 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

Those security guards are better than I thought. Still he manage to elude them so far. Hopefuly they won't think to search the cheerleaders pom-poms.



Author's Response: Wait till you read chapter 10! ;-D

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Date: July 16 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

Sigh. There are Bullys on every planet. At least our hero can take care of himself.



Author's Response: Indeed, he can. :-)

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Date: July 16 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

Botany Boy! Shades of Plant Lad and Chlorophyl Kid from Legion lore. (Plant Lad was only in Adventure 344-345 "The Super Stalag of Space" / "The Execution of Matter Eater Lad")



Author's Response: Heh! I thought sure you'd be making some kind of pun about penal colonies. ;-D

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Date: July 16 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 7

So, if my normal height was five feet/seven inches, she'd be 6'1".

Well I'm 5 foot 10 and can think of two attractive 6 ft 3 actresses I wouldn't mind dating.

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Date: July 16 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

Another  chapter completed. So TTFN, TT&T

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Date: July 16 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

Give him an inch (of height) and he'll take a smile.

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