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Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

Archavia and the Morpher homeworld changing places! That's a plot twist I didn't see comming.

I know I haven't mentined in my stories. but I have allways pictured the Morpher homeworld as a planet sized moon orbiting a gas giant. the gas giant located roughly one AU from the  star.

 

Anyway please contiune with this story.

 

PS. glad to see Tina in this chapter.



Author's Response: Well, like I've often said before: that's the beauty of a multiverse in science fiction. You can depart from canon, and still preserve it, by exploiting other-dimensional counterparts as throw-away characters and/or settings. Depending, of course, on whether the counterpart in question is a person or a place! With regard to this chapter? I wanted to use constellations that nobody else in s.f. (to the best of my knowledge, anyway) had ever used before. Telescopium and Microscopium! As for Tina? Her presence was vital--as a plot bridge from this story to volume 2--right from the start. So, thanks for sticking with me. And, I hope to have Ch. 1 of Vol. 2 up by Labor Day, at the latest.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2015 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 28

That's one way to get back at someone. Glad to see your muse is humming along.



Author's Response: Thanks. :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2015 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

I see you managed to bring this story back to life.

I don't remember giving Bubla the power to shrink to human size. Then again this isn't the first time that wishbone canton has been igoned.

 

That said don't let that you from writting this story.

Like the use of a wishbone wish to avoid paying a resturant bill. 



Author's Response: Don't worry! I respected the canon. Bubla assimilated that power from a counterpart of Annie McAllen. It's my own concept of gastronomancy (a giantess-power first introduced in A "SMALLER" SHADE OF GRAY). On a smaller scale, it's how I had renegade Morphers able to assume more than one shape in A PRIVATE EYE FOR TROUBLE. Hence, in this chapter, Etag Thron being able to transform into a bio-electric vibrator!

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

Sigh! I get busy in RL and the GTS-Goddesses do all kinds of stuff behind my back.

Glad to see your muse is active. I look forward to the next installment.



Author's Response: LOL! I'll do my best not to disappoint you.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 25

Glad to see your muse is working. So she was working on wormhole tech. intresting. Wonder what other plot twists are in store.



Author's Response: In the immortal words of River Song: "Spoilers!" ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 24

Have you married a Valerie?

 



Author's Response: No; it just happens to be one of my Tp 10 favorite Monkee songs. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 24

Glad to see to see this contiuned. Your right about authors being a bit vain.

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2015 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 24

Tulpa: Tibetan Buddhist term for a mental image psychokinetically solidified.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 23

3 reviews before I got to this chapter. It must be a good one by everyone's reckoning.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 23

It has been a long time since i've read this story. I think i'm remember the plot.

I was not expecting Rose Crusher to show up and kidnap Paula. 

Wonder what other surprises are in store.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 23

Semi-needless reminder: "Archavia" and all similar concepts are the intellectual property of Johnny Scribe, Open Highat, et al. And, my usage of them in this highly unofficial pastiche is done with only the utmost respect and gratitude.

Author's Response: Oh! And, for more information on Mr_G's multiverse? Check out "The GTS-Goddess Guide" and "The Mini-Goddess Guide." Both excellent primers, if I do say so, myself!* *That should do it, for the legalistic butt-kissing.

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Date: January 08 2014 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

"What can I tell you about it? Well, it could be big."



Author's Response: "That goes without saying." "Say it, anyway!" *From a classic PARTRIDGE FAMILY episode about computerized credit checking.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 22

That was a short wait. It's a bit werid seeing Claire Martin work with GTS-Goddesses.  Hope Ray can convince the Titan emperor that the danger is more than potential. It's very real. 

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

It's been so long since I've see an update. But it was worth the wait. 

Like how Ray delt with the chef of staff. Never thought I would see Claire Martin tossed like a doll. 

Hope the wait for the next installment is not long.



Author's Response: "Ask, and thous shalt receive...Steve."

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 21

Is Valerie any anagramatical relation?

And it looks like Captain Marvel might have been affected too. LOL.



Author's Response: Nah! She's just an other-dimensional counterpart of one of Mr_G's brain-children.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 20

I've never been able to think of them as goddesses. I like the thought of being swallowed by a down to earth (or up to giantland) human woman who could have been someone I know.

That's my attitude to altitudes anyway.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

I must say I did not expect  Claire Martin to make an apperence. I see she making trouble which is normal for her.

I see those handcuffs are no match for his size changing powers. Wonder what the Titans make of Ray's explanation about what's going on. It must come as a shock.

Anyway keep this story going.

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Date: October 12 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 19

Well La de Dah. I like the dolls castle idea.



Author's Response: Well, Lihsah did think Paula was pretty as a fairy-tale princess.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

One question comes to mind. How come he can make Paula the size of an Archavian woman, but he can't grow to that height himself? 

But far more important I wonder how he will get out of the hands of imperial security service.



Author's Response: The mixed blessing of not being a pure-blooded sizechanger, I suppose.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

It's been a loong time between updates for this story. Ray knows how to make an enterence. Hope the wait for the next update is not long.



Author's Response: I will do my best not to disappoint you, O Faithful One! :-)

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