[Report This]Date: June 18 2013 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Don't Rock the Boat Baby
I really enjoyed this story so far, and chapter 6 was the best in my taste. I hope to see the Alex character return and have another part in the story. For my taste the story lacks a bitte lit of plot and intruging situations, "it just happens not enough". I would had liked it for example if James would had got into serious troubles, things getting worse for him. The whole idea od unaware is this about in my opinion. Maybe Alex returns to the bed for another quick round, and sits near or on top of the place where James was left behind. I would love to see Alex maybe play around with a dildo or pen too, and James could get inserted accidentally in his bum. But so far I will follow the story, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Well this story is coming to a close, however, I've said it before and I'll say it again, I'm going to be writing many more stories that will all most likely have different situations in it. I probably will be finishing this up in about the next chapter, but I'll be moving right along to another story that will cover different ideas. I had planned to put in some male insertion, but I'm thinking I'll leave that to a story based around a shrunken man and two unaware gays. Stick around, lots of stuff will be coming from me, and hopefully if I don't end up writing something that really peaks your interest in this story, a future one will.