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Reviewer: flospring Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

Your story si awesome! I really you will finish it. I like the way Jake's mother dominate him and the fact she is excited to the idea to end his Life. I hope she will do it without any regrets

Reviewer: scarletzdx Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow we need more of this XD
when the next part?

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

Just found this story it's a shame it hassnt been up dated I'm a while it's a really good read :) specially where it left off would be good to see what happens to him. I really hope you continue this

Reviewer: DuffyBear Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 23 2013 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 4

This story is an absolute gem, so glad I've found. You apply a bit of everything which is nice. Eagerly anticipating more. One thing to add perhaps could be the comparison of their size difference? Other than that spot on.  

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

I hope she eats him. A cruel ending would be amazing

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