Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter, glad Claire's mom made an appearance. I love this story an can't wait to see more.

aaron

Author's Response:

Yeah, took a while but I finally introduced her, haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am VERY glad I came back to this story.

Claire is an amazing Gentle but bratty tyrant, I read backwards and oddly she seems to be getting better as she seemed to get worse(for them) the father back I went.

I don't mind the killing so much since I've read much much more gruesome things on this site and she did kind of do a good thing getting rid of those two.

That said in one night Claire has become a personal favorite of mine.

Author's Response:

Thanks, that means a lot. I'm trying to write her as a character that... although she's not always doing the right thing, there's still a lot of likeability to her. I'm trying my best to keep her neutral and somewhat unpredictable. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm very glad you came back too!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

Hmmmmmm! amanda's home for a few days, huh? This is probably the shrinkies' one chance to get some help. Or, at the very least, escape the attic. The only problem with the latter, however, is that, in getting to Amanda's room, they might somehow wind up getting stuck in her carry-on luggage when she goes on her next business trip!*

*I hate thinking ahead. It always gives me a headache.

Author's Response:

Haha, I really love when a story on this site makes me think about the possibilites of what's to come in the next chapters. It means a lot to hear that my story is interesting you enough that your mind is wandering off and thinking about what's next. Thanks for reading and reviewing!