Date: March 23 2017 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
I like that Claire is gentle but crushing those guys was fair. Plus even though she's gentle everyone must obey and be respectful or else.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
Very nice. The 'two' nuckleheads got their just due, squished out like the insects they were. Very fitting for the story, added a bit of force to the giantess...
One thing though, you didn't actually reveal (in the story) that Claire shrunk their green car? Just that when they looked up at her, she was just staring straight ahead...
They actually thought, that they had a chance to get away, thinking that she hadn't even noticed them, not realizing that they'd even been shrunken 'by her'...
I say again,...Very nice, Ding Bing!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked the chapter!
I think you're asking if I mentioned in the story that Claire shrunk the car.. if so, yes, I did so here: “What the fuck did you do?!” yells the other man, snapping Claire's attention onto him. “Where is he?!” Claire quickly aims the device and pulls the trigger again, causing the second man and the green car to vanish from sight as well. Claire inhales and exhales deeply and takes a moment to calm down and collect herself.
Or maybe you're asking if... if the shrunken men thought that Claire didn't know they had shrunken? Anyways, I'm sorry if my wording was confusing... now I'm confused too, haha.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
This chapter was done really well. Now I'm not a crush fan by any means but when they were hideous people anyways who would have rapped her and most likely killed her, I have no problem what so ever with them being crushed by her foot. Glad that she went to a mattress store, that was a really nice gesture that almost blew up in her face. I just hope that store was a smaller mom and pop type with no security system. Can't wait to see how the tinies react to the beds.
aaron
PS wonder if some blood from the crushed car got on a bed?(probably not, but just curious)
Author's Response:
Nope, no blood got on the beds, haha. That is an interesting thought though.
Thanks for reading and reviewing again, I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: September 08 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
I've been following this story since it began, albeit from the shadows, but I really have to commend you on a job well done. My own tastes veer toward the unaware you had in the earlier chapters, but you have done such a stellar job with this, that I keep coming back, hoping you have posted another chapter. Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review. And the shadows can be quite cozy, can't they? Haha.
So I checked out your profile after reading your review and I read Malfunction. You were off to a great start, I'd love to read more if you ever decide to continue writing it. I've noticed it hasn't been updated in 3 years though so I understand if you've lost intrerest in telling that tale since then.
Anyways, thanks for reading and I appreciate the review!
Date: September 08 2013 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great update man! I think its great that claire finally demonstrated how powerful she truly is even if its just for herself to know. Nice work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enoyed! I know you of all people have been waiting for a vehicle to get crushed, I hope I pulled it off well.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2013 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well, defending herself doesn't mean she won't _continue_ to be gentle with her eight "pets." Although, it might make it all too easy for her to rationalize shrinking other people she deems any kind of threat. So, yeah; I'd say she's at a plausible moral crossroads.
Author's Response:
Thanks for continuing to read and review!