[Report This]Date: August 26 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow. Another great chapter. I can't believe how this turned out. Its like your writing exactly what I want to read lol. I would love to see her do something nice for them seeing as how she took away their lives an all. Like maybe deck out the shoebox with some battery operated lights an a door cut into the side or something, just something like that to give them some humanity back, an maybe a deck of cards an so couches from Michael an Amy's house. She could probably shrink anything really an they would appreciate it.
I would also love go see Claire take some of them(most likely Michael) to her room. But at any rate keep doing what you do my friend this story is superb and I can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
PS I just saw 'Dredd' on Netflix and it was badass.
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you very much! Yeah, basically... the plan when I started out was to write the exact type of story that I would want to read. As the author here, I'm writing this story exactly as I would want to read it... as a reader... hopefully this makes sense, haha.
So I've just been having a blast including all of my personal favorite aspects of these tpyes of stories and it's really great to hear in the reviews here that other people are having fun and enjoying the story along the way!
[Report This]Date: August 26 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
This has been a good story, very well done.
Despite being cared and kept by this giantess, are any of the couples gonna enjoy being in her care? It seems Cynthia seems to be getting comfortable.
I wonder if Claire will consider doing fun activities with the tiny people that they might enjoy as well.
Keep up the good work!! I look forward in reading more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I'm very glad that you're still enjoying the story!
Date: August 24 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
Another great chapter, I thought for sure that snail was gonna get crushed though!
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks! The snail was part of a very weird inside joke. This probably won't be the last time you see a snail included, either by me or in the stories of a few other writers here.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2013 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Very clever! Splitting them up, so that if the men tried to escape (or otherwise refused to massage her feet), Claire would have five hostages at her so-called "mercy."
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you!