Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

I also wanted to hit on what Cary said before about her liking Michael, I think that's another element to the story that adds something else to it. Then the part where she says Amy would be jealous of her, I really hope you could expand on that like I said where Claire could possibly take Amy to her room for a discussion or some such thing about Michael. I really loved the part where one of the women(can't remember her name) was enjoying the smell of Claire's feet cause I was so glad that she took the time to properly clean her pretty feet then added lotion. And as I said I can't wait to see the next chapter when Claire comes back up to the attic for more fun.

aaron

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

Holy Crap!!!
This is my kind of chapter. I don't think I could even say anything to express how truly perfect this story has become thanks to this latest chapter. I mean I seriously loved everything about this chapter it's making sense as to why Claire hasn't unshrunk them. An the part when Michael offered her the 50%(I agree with the fact that she couldn't trust them to just go on their separate ways) for his invention was just such a realistic situation. An of course the toenail painting part is just like you went into my head and wrote what I was thinking, awesome!!
An I can't wait to see what happens next, I also liked that Claire wanted to learn their names. I hope you take this as what it is intended to be a complement, the way that you write reminds me of Cayce(my favorite giantess author) which is the greatest complement that I could give.

aaron
PS I would have liked you to describe the 'porta potty' scene a little more thorough. Because I was wondering if they just go on the napkins or what?
An would you mind if I posted this same review on 'the city'?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. And that's definitely a big compliment, Cayce is among my favorite authors as well. 

As for the "porta potty," haha... I figured nobody would really want to read about it but I had to throw something in to explain where they'd be going when the shrunken people had to use the bathroom. Just uh... yeah. Couldn't really think of anything better than that unless Claire shrinks some actual porta potties at some later point, haha.

And yes, feel free to add this to the city as well if you'd like, although I haven't actually gotten around to posting it there yet. I should definitely have it posted there by tomorrow (Monday) night though.