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Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

Dude this story is amazing you've taken many major things that I like in a story and rolled them into one. The footplay and vehicle shrinking being the two major things at least for me.

I think I can sense the dilapidated car being ground to dust beneath her powerful flip-flops later in a display of her power over the group perhaps? And shrinking the vehicles and the machine was very smart on her part, it makes it appear they disappeared without a trace.

Your crafting a wonderful tale ill be eagerly awaiting the next chapters, great work!!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter. And shrinking the 'shrink ray' was a nice touch. Although 'nothing' happened, it was still a very informative chapter. Was interesting seeing the division between the tinies until cooler heads prevailed. Now all they can do is sit and wait for Claire to come back to release them from their prison. Wonder if she's gonna wanna play or give them permanent shelter? Can't wait to find out though.

aaron
PS glad you could post so quickly.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

I bet they all gang up on Michael, since it _is_ technically his fault.

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