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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter and again great details. But I may just be reading to much into it but them getting Claire's help so easily has me worried. But at any rate I can't wait to see what happens next, an hope that there will be some pretty toes/feet involved.

aaron
PS why did he use an older machine to show off to his friends and not the newer fancy one?

Author's Response:

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

In Chapter...2? I believe it was 2... anyways, Michael says that he chose to show off the older machine because it's just visually more exciting. So basically, he just wanted to show that original version off because it looked "cooler" whereas the model he sent Claire to fetch is more practical, but far less interesting to look at.

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