This was masterfully written. I loved all the details an how long it tooh to get to the house. Now that Claire appears to notice them you can take this any way you want which makes it better for the readers. I can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Author's Response:

WOW, thanks for the praise. I was hoping I wouldn't bore everyone but I wanted to stress the distance between the two houses. Thank you for continuing to read and review the story!