Reviewer: ephemeral Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've been waiting for a crush scene, anticipating it.

It was good, especially for a first. I hope there is more...that is my favorite aspect of this fetish. For me though, shoes make it so impersonal...and seeing how you describe her feet so well, I can't wait for the moment there's an intimate meeting of flesh on flesh crush...although there being a flipflop in between this time is a good way to build anticipation.

Looking forward to see how this progresses!

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you you enjoyed! I know what you mean about it being more "impersonal" with shoes on, but you didn't want Claire to hurt her pretty feet on a sharp piece of metal, did you? Haha. 

I hope you continue to enjoy where the story goes, thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Even though she killed those 2, it wansnt for no reason...I wonder if this means shes going to start killing off her little guests. It doesnt seem like shes power hungry, but maybe this event could develop into something evil down the line.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this story. I'd love to see a bit of vore/mouth/tongue teasing with the tinies, but I can understand if that's not the type of thing you want in this story.

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you're enjoying!

That sort of thing isn't out of the question, but so far I haven't really planned any of it. Still, like I said, it's not out of the question, so it could or could not be something I explore eventually. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice chapter, I'm still kind of wondering why she didn't help them, it's to make herself feel powerful right?

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Uh... within the story, yeah, the answer to that is pretty much yes. It's going to come up a little more sometime in the next few chapters.

Outside of the story, the big reason as to why she didn't help them is because if she did, I think this would have been a much shorter and more dull story, haha. I don't want to spoil anything but I have a lot of plans for this story and the tiny people need to stay tiny for these plans to come to fruition. 

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have to agree with aaron on this amy wishes she was still the giantess, and bath time would be a fun idea for claire. Since she has so many toys!

Maybe as for food amy may not have unloaded everything from her car, perhaps there is something in there for them to eat?

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love all the vehicle interaction, kinda surprised she left them up there with the cars while she goes out. Claire is anxious to test how powerful she is compared to the shrunken vehicles and is likely looking for a reason to flatten one beneath her thick powerful flip-flops.

I hope they don't stay in the attic all the time. Keep going, great stuff!

Reviewer: janii8556 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice Going . 

i ll suggest to add up  some idea like tinies resting in truck or maybe like aaron said trying some techniques of escape . and get caught .. and as a punishment claire give some foot play while tinies in truck :D

just a imagination . :D hope other footlovers also like this idea.

 

besides you are good in writing , details .. keep it up .. all the best for further chapters ..Great work !

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

UH OH

Author's Response:

Haha. I hope this a good "UH OH." I remember in your last review you mentioned enjoying how this story seemed different from many other stories on this site, I hope you'll be able to continue to enjoy reading even if it starts to show similarities to them.

Reviewer: ephemeral Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoy this work. It's clear, and at sometimes simplistic in description, but in all the right ways. It really shows up in your minds eye a real picture of what's going on, and in this fetish, that's incredibly important. (At least to me)

So, as a reader, I'm highly anticipating what comes next. I especially like the possible splits you end all the chapters at. A cliffhanger of sorts. For instance, one chapter ended with Claire taking notice of the truck...and you're left wondering what's going to happen next. And now, with her leaving on her mission, and those people being in 2 separate groups...I am left to imagine endless possibilities about what she might end up doing now that the next chapter will focus on her perspective.

I'm glad there's a newer writer with a foot focus, it's fresh and really keeping my interest. I'm coming back day to day to check on progress! Especially after your non-canon teaser chapter, it's clear you know how to work up a good crush scene. I cannot wait.

Looking forward to things to come!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the meaty review, I appreciate it!

I hope my descriptions aren't TOO simple. Please let me know if anything seems rushed and I'll take a look and see if revisions are in order. I think Chapter 3... I think I got so carried away with descriptions back there. I don't know if I will ever be able to top that one quality-wise. I'm happy to hear you say I'm able to paint a clear picture though, that's always important to me when I'm reading something.

Cliffhanger-ish endings... I always hate when episodes of my favorite TV shows end on them, when season finales pull cliffhangers it can be infuriating. I do feel like they've been the best way to end the chapters of this story so far though. If I'm doing them right, like you said, the readers should be anxious to read what comes next and even spend a little time imagining the events that will take place in the following chpater(s). Although I suppose this could potentially be bad. You and the other readers could imagine something really brilliant will unfold in the next chapter and then when you read it you're met with disappointment, haha. Hopefully that won't be the case.

I'm really glad you mentioned the non-canon chapter. You're actually the first person to do so, out of both here and on giantesscity. I've been considering taking that chapter down and was going to do so today and maybe add it in again somewhere down the road but then I read your review.

But anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying so far and I hope you'll continue to be able to.

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh man first contact with a giantess, can't wait to see how she reacts to the tiny vehicle

And its occupants.  She may want to have a bit of fun with them before helping them out,

who knows maybe she's playful?