[Report This]Date: January 23 2023 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Where this leaves off with mother crushing the "ants" is amazing. Wish this story could come back to life
Date: August 07 2018 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
First of all a happy birthday to you.
Secondly, I want to say what a great story you have here. I love that Claire is forceful. Yet still maintains a gentleness in her interactions with Michael and the core group of tiny people, getting them to what she wants with such simple actions. If this ever gets continued I can't wait to see more of that, as well as Amy's growing fascination with being a giant with tiny people at her feet.
Date: March 25 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my new favorite stories! I can't wait for more. I have a feeling Amy is going to somehow cross paths with Thomas and then she'll finally have someone small enough to worship her feet!! Just a theory though. I love all the character development and I love how you involved Claire's mom. I hope she gets to crush some more tinies under her soles. I hope to see another chapter very soon!
Btw, are those Claire's soles in the pic on the first chapter or are they Amy's?
[Report This]Date: December 27 2014 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so much, especially the last 3 chapters. I hope the next chapter has more Amanda and Thomas. Maybe there's a chance Marcus survived after all, between her toes or something. I feel so bad for those guys :(
[Report This]Date: December 20 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Hopefully we can get more. I'd love to see where everything goes from here!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it! I know it's been ages since I've actually updated this story, but I defiitely haven't forgotten about it. I did make a little progress on the next chapter last week, but haven't had time to go back in and finish it yet. Rest assured, more chapters will come, it's just a matter of time.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2014 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet, I love this story and even though it took a while I apprechiate the update nonetheless.
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad to hear you're still enjoying!
Date: May 20 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
As requested I will review this story, Mr. Bing
Date: January 23 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great work. I'd love to write out a massive wall of text giving encouragement, but I'll keep it brief. Excellent story, great chapter, unaware and micro/nano are two massive favourites of mine so maybe I'm biased, but great job. All the best!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and review, glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 19 is probably the single best chapter of gts fiction I've ever read, keep up the amazing work! Also, maybe stick to infrequent but long chapters (hate it when it's just an update of 500 words in a story).
Author's Response:
WOW, Thanks!
I agree, long chapters are great, as long as the author can keep things interesting.
With the exception of the very first one, I don't think this story has any other chapters under 2,000 words. I don't even mean for them to be so long, it just happens, haha. Sometimes I'm writing a new chapter for this story and it gets so lengthy that I just split it into two separate updates. I almost did that for this latest one, but I thought people have been waiting a while to see an update, I might as well finish it up and release it all as a single post.
I remember you reviewing one of the very early chapters, great to see you're still enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whoa! I get ta be the hundreth reviewer? Cool! ;`)
Claire's Mom,, unknowingly'' murdering them tiny little micro-men... 'Stomping them one at a time, while the others were forced to watch! Amazing floor show!
The micro sized men most likely couldn't even see anything above her knee's, as they gawked up into the heavens and watched as she singled them out and stomped her massively huge barefootsy right down on top of them, and the whole time thinking that they were just little ants...
Nice! Claire's a pretty devious little Minx...
Can't wait to see what she doe's next!
Author's Response:
Yeah, thanks for the 100th review!
Good to see you enjoyed the chapter and are looking forward to more! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 22 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
You asked, so I will say I am disapointed by the direction Claire has gone. I hate to see cute girls fall into "madness". The whole keeping the people in the attic thing, certainly indicated that this was a possibility. But I still held hope that there was a line she wouldn't cross. I actually rooted for her when she crushed those violent men during the bed quest as they deserved it. That was a situation where I feel violence is warranted and maintains the "innocence" of the giantess. I'm sure a majority of the respondents here will demand more violence, and if that's the type of story you're shooting for, then that's fine. I'm just not part of that crowd and will rate according to my tastes. I will refrain from rating until I see what direction this story is headed.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! This chapter was very difficult to write. Having Claire finally do something "evil" was hard for me, but I needed a new conflict or the story as a whole was going to stagnate. I feel this was long overdue. There's a lot more to it than that but for now I can't say too much without spoiling things. I hope that you'll be able to enjoy the future chapters, but if you start losing interest in what's happening I completely understand, and I definitely appreciate that you kept up with the story for as long as you did!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I honestly could draw something but... I really don't like older women. At all. Sorry :c
Author's Response:
Haha, what? If you mean Amanda, she's not THAT old. And this is literally the ONLY chapter out of 19 in which she interacts with shrunken characters. There are plenty of scenarios with Claire that you could draw something from if you wanted to, I didn't mean I was hoping to see something exclusively from this chapter.Thanks for reading and reviewing though!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, Claire has certainly taken a liking to her newfound power...At the expense of innocent lives. Not that I stopped loving this story, despite its new direction but it does mean that I'm rooting for the tinies now! It was all fun and games before, and I agree that she killed someone out of self defense...But now it's just for her entertainment. GO TINIES!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: December 16 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
first of all , good to see you again :D after such a long break ..
short update and we hope you will give such short teasers often with less intervals :D
in the end , no killing and vore , plzz
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Uh... I'll be completely honest with you, you may or may not be disappointed with some things that happen as this story keeps going, but I hope that overall you are able to enjoy!
Date: December 16 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
So glad to see the story back. Judging by the situation she must be planning on having her mother unawarely destroying some of the shrunken players, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, hopefully it won't be too much longer until you see what happens!
Date: November 08 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your late updates might loose readers concentration.specially at such situation when claire has whole bus of men in her hand ....
waiting.........................................
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm sorry it's been so long since the last update. I just haven't found myself in the writing mood lately and don't want to force myself to write and risk it resulting in a very poorly written chapter, you know what I mean? I hope people understand and I promise the next chapter is still coming.
Thank you very much for the review, it means a lot to hear that you're still interested in seeing where the story goes next.
Date: October 12 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh man yeah I'm definitely pumped for the next chapter! I can see any one of the scenarios aaron mentioned being touched on in the next chapter, and that would not be disappointing at all!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you're looking forward to it! I'm still working on it, might be a few days before it's wrapped up completely but I hope to have the chapter done this week. Over 1,700 words so far, looks like it might be a big chapter!
Date: October 12 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Alright now I'm curious, I guess I'll take a stab at this just for my own sanity. I will purposefully leave out crucial details
scenario 1 is Amanda will find the tinies an try to help them only to end up shrunken herself...
scenario 2 will involve Amanda mistaking somebody for a bug *squish*
scenario 3 finds Amanda behaving like her daughter towards the tinies.
now I most likely will be wrong on all accounts but the thing that will be the likeliest outcome should be where Amanda gets added to Claire's collection. At any rate im extremely intrigued for the next chapter to come.
aaron
PS please don't let what I say influence your story, this is strictly speculation & conjecture.
Author's Response:
Haha. I really love that you're thinking over all the different possibilities. All I'm gonna say is this: you might be on to something there with one of those scenarios. Haha, other than that, I don't want to give anything away just yet.
Date: October 12 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lol 50/50 huh... I like those odds.
aaron
Author's Response:
Haha. I mean, I'm hopeful that you'll enjoy it, but based on things you've said in the past, I'll completely understand if you don't. And now I really need to stop talking before I start spoiling things, haha.
Date: September 30 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Soooooooooooooo boring.....
Author's Response:
Haha, well, thanks for at least giving it a try I guess. I am curious, though... did you only read the first couple of chapters? I'm not going to say this is some incredibly exhilarating adventure, but compared to the first two chapters, chapters three and onwards aren't exactly dull.
Thanks for leaving me your thoughts.