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Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

I hope to see more Clara x Charolette in the future. Also hoping for some Nucky torment.

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 25

I've been a long time reader of this story there are too many things I like about it to list. But I do have to say I'm glad Charlotte finally has gotten on clara's good side I've always enjoyed the idea that Charlotte likes what clara does to the tinies and wishes she had that kind of power those two really make a good pair.

But lea seems pretty jealous,  I sure hope she doesn't try to get rid of Charlotte.  Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 25

This just gets more and more interesting! These last two chapters added a very unexpected and very intriguing twist.

I'm excited to see a relatively strong individual in Nucky and that Charlotte's efforts have finally granted her comfortable asylum. Furthermore I look forward to seeing how this newly developed rivalry between Lea and Charlotte will unfold!

Lea seems to be at a disadvantage among the trio with her naivete, heavily contrasting with both Charlotte and Nucky, who seem to be lacking the exposure to Clara's potential for deception, or are just all too aware of her dominating sadistic half.

With all this stuff going on now I can't wait for the future additions, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 25

I like Charolette. I think that Clara needs to show Lea where Nucky's place is (if you know what I mean.) Lea's getting a little out of line.

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