I had a great time reading this!

The concept and setting is excellent. The characters are very entertaining and I loved the idea of multiple mice tribes, though my only criticism would be that Clara seemed to have artificial character development regarding her contradictive emotions. She doesn't seem to gain any further understanding of herself through her experiences and confidences where it seems reasonable to expect it.

Like if she were leaning into her mellow personality, more hesitation and contemplation of cause and effect consequences when interacting with the mice.

Or if she were leaning toward her sadistic side, more cunning methods to reach her goal, such as intentionally letting half of her victims survive, because since the mice seem fully intelligent, they would probably seek out a new home rather than take their chances with her. It would also allow for more instances of reoccurring characters and a deeper dynamic with mice tribes.

This story is very well written and structured. I'll very much look forward to additional entries here. :)

I've been givng this rave reviews over at giantesscity (different handle), don't worry, not everyone over here is into the gentle, plenty of us like the more hard core stuff but I don't consider this gory at all, gory to me is pulling arms off, blood gushing every where, things like that, this is just a good old crush story with some other flavors mixed in, it's a perfect story and couldn't be written any better.