[Report This]Date: April 15 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Finishing the Job
Wait...so all we have to do is ask and you'll quickly deliver another chapter?! I will use this information wisely and very frequently.
And me, a sock puppet? Please. I have way too much personality for that. Several personalities in fact. In which case, I may be you and simply not know it. Let the paranoia insue!
I should probably start the actual review now, right? Ok, so I've only read of sex with a milk duct once before, and have found it be a very attractive idea. So bonus points for that, because it's part of the reason I'm drawn to the gts fetish.
Steve's reluctance, as well as Kelsey's need to protect(and in a way...possess) him is one of the things I really enjoy with this story. I see it in a lot of different writing, and it always makes me smile. Seeing their devotion is just heart warming. I know it's only been about 15-17 hours since they met, but it feels much longer. So much content in such short time.
Another chapter at your earliest convenience, please. But don't rush things. It's a very detailed and entertaining piece of fiction, after all. I appreciate all the work you've put into this story already, as well as what's to come. Thanks so much.
Author's Response:
Haha, well maybe it's not that easy, but your frequent commenting, along with your inshights and suggestions, have certainly made it easier for me to write the past couple of chapters. So use your powers for good, please. And while I sincerely hope I'm not Tyler Durden-ing myself, I could certainly do worse.
I thought I may have stolen the milk duct sex from someone else. Seemed too good for me to come up with by myself. You don't happen to remember which story you read it in, do you?
Thanks for another kind and motivating review!