Date: November 28 2013 1:46 PM Title: Oh How The tables Have Turned
I finally found this story again after a lot of searching. I don't what happened, but I truly hope that you decide to start it up again. This is probably my favorite story on this website. It's so amazing and well written. I really wanna know how this ends! Hope you get back to it soon!
Author's Response:
Hey, thank you. I'm really sorry for not getting any new updates for so long but I promise more are coming. Things have just been really crazy but are slowing down and I will have an update soon
Date: July 16 2013 1:59 PM Title: Ethan
Nice job on upping the stakes and keeping the story interesting! I'll be waiting on th edge of my seat for the next update!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2013 1:40 PM Title: Oh How The tables Have Turned
Begins rhythmic chant:
"THREE--SOME! THREE--SOME! THREE--SOME! THREE-SOME!"
Date: July 03 2013 4:40 PM Title: Ethan and Lori
Such a twist, for me. Especially with this chapter. I was thinking that it was going to be Minnie, what with this only being possible with her as the "goddess" so you got me really good with this. Its a great story, keep it up.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2013 4:04 PM Title: Ethan and Lori
Make everyone happy? :-(
YGTK!
I think the only way that will happen, in my case, is if Minnie gets to have a threesome with Lori and Ethan when they're not servicing Marta.
Date: July 03 2013 3:07 PM Title: Ethan and Lori
Not gonna lie. I yelled at " Yes! " like three times when I saw Marta had won. Team Marta All The Way!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2013 4:49 PM Title: Ethan
Day 7. No new chapters. I'm losing my mind. I don't what I'm going to do with myself until the next update. Just kidding haha really can't wait until the next update! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Well you know, I had to start the story off really strong to get the attention of those that would love it. Then, I allow for time to pass between chapters to let everyone that hasn't gotten to read it all to catch up, and to keep everyone else in suspense. Thanks for the compliment. I try to make it the kind of story I want to read
[Report This]Date: June 24 2013 9:54 PM Title: Ethan
Can't wait to see who won (other then the reader)
Author's Response:
Lol thanks. Read on and see. I have just put in the new chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 24 2013 6:43 AM Title: Day 5 Concluded
[Begins rhythmic chant.]
"MIN-NIE! MIN-NIE! MIN-NIE! MIN-NIE!"
Author's Response:
Lol, well, read and find out. I know you are all about Minnie
[Report This]Date: June 23 2013 10:39 AM Title: Day 5 Concluded
I absolutely love this story. Nice job with the whole Minnie vs. Marta thing! I'm totally Team Marta though haha. I was wondering if you've considered doing a prequel to this story? About the time Lori spent shrunken with her roommate. I'd be highly interested to read it. If not its fine because this story is just that great!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate it. And I actually have really given consideration to it. I think it could be fun. It wouldn't be nearly as long as this, but I think it would be cool for the readers to get to see Lori's story before all of this happens.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2013 10:37 PM Title: Day 5 Concluded
Hoping it's Marta, she had the intel advantage as well as a far stronger drive and motivation, to go down like that would seem too foolish considering her previously cunning demeanor.
I know it's a pretty good story because I have someone I'm rooting for, well done lol
Author's Response:
Very good point. Read on and see for yourself.
Thanks
[Report This]Date: June 22 2013 6:12 PM Title: Day 5 Concluded
Great chapter. I hope it's Marta but if the goddess is Minnie that's great too. Story is written very well an I hope to see more.
aaron
Author's Response:
Once you read the next chapter, you will know. And thanks for the comments.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2013 5:57 AM Title: Ethan
YES, go Minne!!!
Author's Response:
Lol she is pretty awesome
[Report This]Date: June 11 2013 11:55 PM Title: Day 5 Continued
Can't wait to see what happens next
aaron
Author's Response:
I'm excited to see how it goes
[Report This]Date: June 11 2013 2:37 PM Title: Day 5 Continued
Personally, I'm rooting for Minnie. If only because a victory over Marta would truly make her...a "Minnie-giantess."
X-D
Author's Response:
Haha that's funny. I can see you definitely like Minnie. We will find out soon how this turns out.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2013 9:18 AM Title: Day 5
Great job. I love the fact that Lori likes this and wanted it to happen. Now Minnie is gonna have her way with little Lori. Wonder how Marta will react to this?
aaron
Author's Response:
It's a mystery how Marta will deal with Lori, that is, if she wins her showdown with Minnie
[Report This]Date: June 10 2013 2:11 PM Title: Ethan
Great story, definitely one of the ones that I've been following lately. I loved the slow shrink aspect; you played that very well in my opinion.
Author's Response:
I appreciate that. Thanks for the comment and hope you continue to enjoy the story
[Report This]Date: June 10 2013 2:04 PM Title: Day 5
At this rate, Minnie will have THREE foot-slaves by the start of ch. 14!
Author's Response:
We will find out in the net chapter
[Report This]Date: June 09 2013 1:40 PM Title: Day 4 Concluded
I think there's going to be an exchange of prisoners (of love) at the end of chapter 12. That's what I think. Marta get Little Ethan back. And, Minnie gets to experience how the Other Team lives (if you catch my drift).
Author's Response:
Interesting thought. We will have to wait and find out
Date: June 07 2013 7:13 PM Title: Day 4 Concluded
I like it. A few things are missing but I really do like it!
Author's Response:
What is missing? I am actually curious because I would like to make my writing style one that will please as many people as possible. So if there is something missing, I would love to hear constructive criticism