[Report This]Date: May 21 2013 10:32 AM Title: Day 4 Continued
Great chapter and story so far. I'm wondering if Minnie's planning on taking him home or sharing him with others. I actually find the Lori character pretty flat and pedantic, so I'm glad she's not prominent. Hopefully something keeps her out the story or she ends up shrunk herself. The idea of subservience to various hired help is much more original and intriguing. Anyways, it's your story and I'll read it regardless. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I have thought about Lori ending up small and we will just see how this plays out.
Thanks for the comment and glad to hear you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 4:24 PM Title: Day 4 Continued
I just read all nine chapters in one sitting...and this was the best of them all!
Minnie would appear to have committed the perfect crime. I mean; Marta and the title character have been keeping Our Hero secret from her. So, when Marta comes home and can't find the little guy, how are they going to broach the subject? Short of wrestling her to the ground and strip-searching her, that is.
No way that I can see! ;-)
Author's Response:
First off, I'm glad to see you are enjoying the story. That makes me happy.
And though it may seem like the perfect crime, remember, Lori has cameras all over the house. Marta doesn't know about any of it but Lori will find out. It's just a matter of whether it will be too late.
Glad you are enjoying it and please feel free to leave more comments