[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Reunited
Love the story but no teachers or anyone peeking around when they notice the entire school murdered mysteriously?
Date: September 02 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Whims of a Bored Goddess
Seems interesting to me
Good read so far.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Miranda
Great chapter, love how they have a power high and how violent both of them are. I knew Kira would be but Miranda being that violent was a lovely surprise. Hope it never ends.
Author's Response:
I was not sure how I wanted to handle Miranda's character; deciding that she just sought to imitate Kira in her own way seemed like an extension of her love/obsession with Kira itself. It's also just really fun to write that stuff.
Date: July 02 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Fun Begins
gotta say, seein an update to this one is refreshing. I thought it died o.O
I welcome the future additions bro =D
[Report This]Date: May 02 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Seduction
Great nre chapter. I wonder if Brad will survive or die. I just hope she doesn't make any deaths easy. I love her violent attitude. Keep them coming.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Trial of the Guinea Pig
I'm glad Kira wasn't completely heartless in this tale. At least to her friend XD
Sometimes, writers can make characters just seem so fucked up when it comes to these types of scenarios
Good addition though bro !
Date: May 01 2013 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Trial of the Guinea Pig
Yea, I love redheads! This is looking promising!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Trial of the Guinea Pig
Love the chapter. I wonder what kind of revenge they have planned. If it was me I know exactly what I would do. This story has so many possibilities. Cannot wait to see where you take it.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Oh wonder of Rebecca will be all right. I can sence tha malice in the heart of Kira. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Maybe she will be, maybe she won't be...time will tell =]
Date: April 30 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Wow, quite the start
All I can suggest is maybe spacing out the dialogue a little bit so it's not so congested perhaps XD
Hope to see more of this one in the future though!
Author's Response:
Ok. It looked fine in my word processor and was squished a bit upon submission. I'll edit it first next time.