Reviews For The Aquarium
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Reviewer: DollsizeHarlequin Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 3:13 AM Title: Intro

I was loving reading this, any chance of you continuing it?

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2013 12:26 AM Title: Intro

Forgot to rate

Reviewer: 1mmtall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 6:08 AM Title: Intro

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: HarelequinEms Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 6:02 AM Title: Intro

Your english is certainly good enough for you not to worry too much about it. There were a few points in the chapters that didn't make sense the first time of reading them but it was easy enough to get your head round what they meant. Certainly you have a better grasp of english then some of the english speaking writers on this site!

The story was an interesting read, i really enjoyed the attitude Lisa had towards Emy and you've got some good development going on. Perhaps some slightly more in-depth detail with your descriptions would be good, but you have enough that it wouldn't be missed if it wasn't put in.

Keep up the good work :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I thought I would use my bad english combined with low in depth description to make a more fast paced story. We'll see, I'm mostly writen towards where my imagination brings me to. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2013 12:57 AM Title: Intro

You have my interest..

Reviewer: UserDoesNotExist Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2013 10:04 AM Title: Intro

This is gonna go south so quickly. Though I object to the inclusion of a 10 year old as the person being tortured, I'm also curious.

I love to hate the world these stories exist in. I liked it more when it was a universal deal as with the Insole Girl, but it's also interesting when it isn't such as A Little Blackmail.

I'm really curious, and am looking forward to this. Especially with Lisa.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2013 10:04 PM Title: Intro

 

I like what I read 

Reviewer: Ace of Spades Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2013 9:59 PM Title: Intro

keep writing ^^

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