Reviews For Perfect Dimension
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Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

Very good work capturing the intensity in this chapter, poor Charis makes a convenient punching bag since she isn't jailbroken lol

Always looking forward to additions!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your continued reviews, soniti54 (and TinyDann). Sorry I haven't been responded to your comments; I've been extremely busy recently and have pared down all of my GiantessWorld.net activities to essential systems only (writing chapters and posting them). Hopefully I'll get more active again with reviews and whatnot soon.

And yes, Charis was/is a totally expendable asset in these fights from a cold-blooded strategic standpoint, but she seems game. I'm hoping to develop her further in upcoming chapters, and also to continue to improve my pacing. Glad you're still with me.

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