Date: September 11 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story, loving it so far.
Was actually going for the 14 years of age. What made you change that, if i you could be so kind enough to answer?
Author's Response:
Well, I had it there originally because I thought it would be a more compelling story. That being said, I don't think it's ever a good idea to have underage characters on a fetish website. I normally view this self-imposed rule as non-negotiable in the stories I write, but I somehow convinced myself to make an exception; anyway, I decided to change it back in keeping with that rule, and also thanks to some encouragement in the reviews.
Glad you like the story Cooper, more to come on Monday!
[Report This]Date: September 04 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, I can imagine how being underaged would have a heavier impact and possibly facilitate stronger emotional reactions within the story. Personally I think it does fit better. I really don't see the issue with it and wouldn't have thought that one would have come up. Certainly nothing to be embarrassed about.
If I'm not mistaken the story began rated R and moved on to X, so I'm disappointed that an adult would be so offended by something only subtly hinting at a more contraversial subject. He didn't trick anybody. It's called a plot twist. An extremely common part of most good, well thought-out stories. And like most good, well-thought out stories, this one also has a plot twist.
To be blunt, one of the only things that offends me are people who are easily offended-- since they are the ones that tend to ruin things for the majority of others.
(pardon the side-track)
As one of my favorite stories by far I'll definately see this one through till the end. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, soniti54. I'm glad you're staying with me. I think we're at about the halfway point, so you'll be getting plenty more of Gage, Charis, and Rima!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
14 huh? Get ready for a rough ride Casanova. You're gonna be raked over the coals for this one. Frankly the age thing doesn't bother me, unless an ACTUAL child was harmed in the making of this story or as a result of it. Its the drama that this creates for the characters that makes this a good plot device. I am a little disapointed that this will most likely mean no romance among the characters, unless they all decide to stay in the game forever or they wait have to wait 4 years for Gage to grow up. Poor Charis, err Haley. I'll keep reading to see how this turns out.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, riczar. I indeed got "raked" a fair amount, and deservedly so, but hopefully I was able to make things at least a little right. I had to redact the plot twice, but the good news for you is that with the second plot change your hope for some sort of romance burns anew.
Date: May 20 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
So I guess I am asking for permission to write a story like this, that or for you to make this an open series and THEN I have permission to add onto it.
Author's Response:
Of course you can -- and either way you want to do it is fine by me. If you have any questions just PM me here or on GiantessCity.com (I'm Fuzzhead on there).
Date: April 11 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, really wanna see where you take this!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Hopefully I'll run with it for a while... I made a bet with UHF that I could add a chapter a week for longer than he could, so maybe that extra incentive will keep me going.