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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 4:53 PM Title: Iris and Paul

It's an interesting start. It's probably best if you try and avoid using abbreviations such as "EKG" as people won't know what they mean. At least tell use the first time and then perhaps use the abbreviations afterwards.



Author's Response:

oh yeah okay

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