Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 2:04 PM Title: Out of the dream right into the nightmare

Why is his twelve year old sister having sexual thoughts? Also, why is he randomly appearing in front of her? I thought Tess was suppose to be looking after him. When I first saw the chapter title I thought it was Tess who had turned evil but then I releaved that it was his sister and then, finally I was not so releaved because she's twelve and having these thoughts. Not sure if it's appropriate but it's your story.