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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 1:31 PM Title: IMPOSSIBLE

Here: “Locked and I am dieing right side your door dad.”


 


It's a nice story so far, but you need to proofread. Shocked Tess is his cousin. Was not expecting that. The explanation makes sense though. Also, there is a huge blank space at the end of this chapter that needs removing.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 2:07 PM Title: IMPOSSIBLE

Love the story so far. Really great build up. Cannot wait to see what is in store for him.



Author's Response:

It's been some time, I have been out of town with no internet for over a month. But I am working on adding to the story now that I am back. Also, Thanks for likeing how I built it up so far.

 

 

 

 

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