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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 6:36 PM Title: Defying a Horrifying Death

Great story, love how he's on the verge of death and she doesn't know. Such great unaware. Perfect so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 8:30 PM Title: Defying a Horrifying Death

Great story.

Disappointing, short chapter.

 



Author's Response:

you say it's short I say it's not. you shouldnt write a review based on a word count.

I never see you write any story before yet you have the nerve to tell people to write more for your own pleasure so you can read more fiction. most authors put their heart and soul into their writing and dont need you putting them down.

it's not always about how many words are in a story but what they say.  Asukafan created a minimum of 500 words per chapter and if it's okay by him then you shouldnt worry about it.

 I didnt see you reviewing the last chapter and that was 3 times as long.  Please do not review my story anymore based on how many words are in a chapter. you throwing low ratings isnt going to motivate me to write more words it's going to wonder why i post when theres people like you throwing low ratings because they dont like the word count when it doesnt matter. Again, it's not always about how many words are in a story but what they say. 

if someone had revied my last longest chapter maybe i would be inspired to write another one like it but since i got nothing from that chapter i didnt think it mattered and it shouldnt because again it's not always about how many words are in a story but what they say. 

 

Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 9:17 AM Title: Defying a Horrifying Death

Excellent story so far! I love how detailed and drawn out you're making the character's experience. I really can't wait for the breast part! Any chance of a stop at the underarms while he's exploring her torso?

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm trying to make it as detailed as possible. I wasnt going to write much about the underarm, but since i'm trying to write in detail about every part of her body, I'll throw in an extra couple of sentences for you.

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