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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2013 5:37 PM Title: Shrinking Yourself Down and Entering Her Room

Very good start, Mr. E.

I'm looking forward to its continuation.

Note the following correction:

"I wanted to plant a kiss on those opulent, pink lips, but thought it would be better to wait until she closed her mouth and started breathing through her nose. Then I could sneak out from underneath her bottom lip..."




Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the grammar correction. I've actually been rereading the whole time since i've posted it adding a few words and correctin spelling and grammar mistakes but that one would have slipped right by me.

The conclusion is going to be EPIC but before that is a lot of voyuerism and almost every part of her body will be explored

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