Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 2:37 PM Title: Introduction

I implore you to figure out some way of continuing this piece. You've set up such an interesting premises I find it a little unfair that you just leave it at two chapters.

 

That's my way of saying I like the story, please write more.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 10:48 AM Title: Introduction

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm! I wonder how they're going to accmomplish that?

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2013 2:06 AM Title: Introduction

I would have expected her mother to be more relectant, like her mother getting in the way of her love for a commoner, and by the end of the story finally accepting her love for that commoner. it's just an idea. I'm sure your story will be good anyway.

I read all of your note and it explained everything so I have nothing more to add.