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Reviewer: IDrawThings Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter VI: Friend In Need

I absolutely love the story and the idea of a person from Earth coming to a world of tiny people. I love the style of writing, and the plot twist about Carn and Alin is really keeping me interested. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Oh, we've still got one more VIP to introduce. And he's my favorite character!

Just have to wait!

Reviewer: Story smith Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter VI: Friend In Need

Is there a secret meaning in this chapter? It seems like Cathy would be an excellent hostage in the matter of controlling Amanda

Author's Response:

I'll answer honestly. 

Nope. I'm really not trying to put little 'hidden foreshadowing secrets' into the story. So disregard anything you read that may seem like a foreshadow.

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