[Report This]Date: May 16 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
Execute, a 400 foot tall woman......yeah-right....
Glad your continuing this, really great plot-building, and discriptions too.
Can't wait for next chapter, DUDE!
Author's Response:
Tiny men have devious ideas... Amanda doesn't know it yet, but she might actually be in trouble... Or is she?
Date: May 16 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
it looks like you've put quite a bit of thought into this story, and what mean by that is primarly to do with explaining the language barriers, and if course other little details.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
Nice to see you back. An this story too.
Can't wait to see the revolution as well as the sergeant and carn plan that involves taking out the giantess for their plans to work. And them being friends was a very nice touch.
aaron
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
I love it! Can't wait to see her play some more with the people - and I see where You are going with the PRR, but she does not need to be very cruel with them or anything - four hundred feet tall is a huge difference to scare them off (at least one third of a million times more massive?).
Also - would love to see more details about how the people feel about her power over them, how she humbles them.
Otherwise all great and can't wait for the next chapter! I found the concerned gentleness greatly relaxing when I needed a break or was stuck :)
Regards, Gerald.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! It's always great to receive input on how others view my stories than "Well Done" or such. I haven't given any of my stories much thought for the past month so who knows where I'm going...
ANYWAY, I am happy and hope you continue to read.
Sincerely, DMG
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
I am glad to hear that you haven't died. hope to see more updates from you soon. :D
Author's Response:
I hope to keep it that way. On both conditions.