[Report This]Date: February 28 2013 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 3: Family Turmoil at Dinner
Great story, I wonder if Ashley will mistake Jack as a piece of candy or popcorn. Maybe she'll have a a more inimate mistake in mind. Can't wait for the next chapter. Alot of ideas are popping in my mind. I cannot wait to see where you go.
Author's Response: No, not yet my little friend
Date: February 11 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 3: Family Turmoil at Dinner
I just realized your username is an anagram for giantess. One of my friends is a giantess but she wouldn't do what Ashley is doing to Jack. We mostly talk about science because she is very smart for her age but I'm her only friend apparently...
There's something about the title of your story, but I can't quite figure it out. I'm guessing it could serve as a warning to people. Maybe it's because normal males like a hearty chest, obviously ever chest has a heart but I'm sure you know what I mean, and in Jack's quest for Ashley's he will put himself in great danger? That's what I think anyway. People talk about wolves in sheeps clothing and I reckon Ashley will be a wolf in peacocks clothing, simply because peacocks ae pretty like her and I seem to be doing a really long review so I'm going to stop now.
Author's Response: Very interesting ideas little one
[Report This]Date: February 11 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 3: Family Turmoil at Dinner
Awesome chapter. Keep it up! Oh, and I'm glad you enjoyed my stories. Can't wait to see what you add to my collection if you decide to help.
Author's Response: Glad you are liking te story
[Report This]Date: February 10 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 3: Family Turmoil at Dinner
Hmmm, dinner and a movie, with a fifty-foot Ashley! Sounds dangerous!
Jack really snapped out of it quick though, after being treated like an appetizer?
Great story! Keep it going, I'll be following this one......
Author's Response: Glad you liked :)